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Lost Catch
Don’t panic. Just work with me here. Can you kick off your boots? Your parka? No? Okay. Stay calm. Got anything that would grab on to the ice? No, no! Not an axe! That wasn’t what I meant.
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Oh, those Trifecta folks have done it again. This challenge? 33 words plus five: “That wasn’t what I meant.”
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Something about today’s political goings-on made me remember this 33-word post about PANIC.
Well done with great dialogue. Full of suspense.
Great job! Intriguing and suspenseful. Well done with only 33 words.
Nice! one of my favorites so far. I love the dialogue; it feels very real. Thanks for linking up.
Yikes – an axe would not be helpful at all, I think. Great intensity in the speaker’s voice.
yikes! 🙂